Good points : * I love your main image it shows a clear representation of your genre and making it black and white really makes your colour scheme stand out *I also like your feature title 'Burning Dreams@ its name also caters to the genre andwould attract your audience.
things you could improve: -Your title 'Electric@ is a great name for a rock mag, but doesn't look electric, it would look better if you choose a font that really looked electric to make your whole magazine stand out from all others. -Your image is brilliant, maybe to match your colour scheme of red etc, you could make your lips red or a part of your outfit, to make the image not fade into the background.
I like the lay out of your page and having the image in black white white really compliments the genre of your magazine, also the title you have chosen is also very appropriate for your genre. On the other hand your page looks a little empty and because of that picture of paramore you will be marked down. If you want to use paramore you have to use there logo not an actual photo as this will bring your grade down
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*I also like your feature title 'Burning Dreams@ its name also caters to the genre andwould attract your audience.
things you could improve:
-Your title 'Electric@ is a great name for a rock mag, but doesn't look electric, it would look better if you choose a font that really looked electric to make your whole magazine stand out from all others.
-Your image is brilliant, maybe to match your colour scheme of red etc, you could make your lips red or a part of your outfit, to make the image not fade into the background.
I like the lay out of your page and having the image in black white white really compliments the genre of your magazine, also the title you have chosen is also very appropriate for your genre. On the other hand your page looks a little empty and because of that picture of paramore you will be marked down. If you want to use paramore you have to use there logo not an actual photo as this will bring your grade down
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