Friday, 4 February 2011

1st Draft Contents Page


2 comments:

  1. Good points:
    * your images again are good and the use of the drums show your genre.
    * I like the colour scheme of the red and black, it makes all the colour images stand out more.

    Things to improve:
    -your text is placed all arround the age, you could maybe add more images and place them near the texr to make the page look more full.
    - you could also add images of different people to show what kind of artists will be inside.

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  2. In your contents page I like the way it is laid out and presented and the colors are really bold and effective but your image at the bottom is really hard to see and you could use a few more pictures.

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