Friday, 4 February 2011

1st Draft Article Page 2


2 comments:

  1. The lighting bolts are really good.
    Maybe use only two images on opposite sides of the page.
    And use a more exciting font for 'Burning Dreams'
    I like the gradient black and grey world.

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  2. Good Points:
    *your images are great :) they really reveal the genre your magazine is by your costume.
    *I like the lightning it brings out the text more and makes the magazine look fun.

    Things to improve:
    - I think you could make your titles more bigger to fill up the page, this will help with making the page look interesting and loud, which is associated with rock.
    -you could also either spread your images out a little more or make them different sizes and overlap eachother to make the magazine look care-free and independant.

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